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\u0427\u0430\u0441\u0442\u044c \u041f\u0435\u0440\u0432\u0430\u044f<\/a><\/h2>\n

\u0418\u0442\u0430\u043a, \u043f\u0440\u043e\u0434\u043e\u043b\u0436\u0438\u043c.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n

\u041f\u0410\u0420\u0410\u041c\u0415\u0422\u0420 2
\nCoherence and Cohesion
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\nCoherence – \u044d\u0442\u043e \u0440\u0430\u0437\u0431\u0438\u0432\u043a\u0430 \u043d\u0430 \u0430\u0431\u0437\u0430\u0446\u044b \u0438 \u0438\u0441\u043f\u043e\u043b\u044c\u0437\u043e\u0432\u0430\u043d\u0438\u0435 \u0432\u0432\u043e\u0434\u043d\u044b\u0445 \u0441\u043b\u043e\u0432 \u043c\u0430\u043a\u0440\u043e-\u043f\u043e\u0440\u044f\u0434\u043a\u0430, \u0430 cohesion – \u044d\u0442\u043e \u0443\u043f\u043e\u0440\u044f\u0434\u043e\u0447\u0435\u043d\u043d\u043e\u0441\u0442\u044c \u043f\u0440\u0435\u0434\u043b\u043e\u0436\u0435\u043d\u0438\u0439 \u043d\u0430 \u0443\u0440\u043e\u0432\u043d\u0435 \u0430\u0431\u0437\u0430\u0446\u0430 \u0438 \u0438\u0441\u043f\u043e\u043b\u044c\u0437\u043e\u0432\u0430\u043d\u0438\u0435 \u0432\u0432\u043e\u0434\u043d\u044b\u0445 \u0441\u043b\u043e\u0432 \u0438 \u0441\u043e\u044e\u0437\u043e\u0432 \u043c\u0438\u043a\u0440\u043e-\u043f\u043e\u0440\u044f\u0434\u043a\u0430, \u0432 \u0442.\u0447. \u0441\u043e\u044e\u0437\u043e\u0432 \u0438 \u043c\u0435\u0441\u0442\u043e\u0438\u043c\u0435\u043d\u0438\u0439. <\/p>\n

\u041d\u0430\u043f\u043e\u043c\u043d\u044e, \u0447\u0442\u043e \u044d\u0442\u043e \u0432\u0441\u0451 \u0441\u0442\u043e\u0438\u0442 25% \u043e\u0442 \u043e\u0446\u0435\u043d\u043a\u0438, \u0438 \u043f\u0440\u0435\u0434\u0443\u043f\u0440\u0435\u0436\u0443, \u0447\u0442\u043e \u044d\u0442\u043e \u0442\u043e\u0442 \u043f\u0443\u043d\u043a\u0442, \u0433\u0434\u0435 \u043c\u043d\u043e\u0433\u0438\u0435 \u0438\u0437\u0443\u0447\u0430\u044e\u0449\u0438\u0435 \u0430\u043d\u0433\u043b\u0438\u0439\u0441\u043a\u0438\u0439 \u0432 \u043e\u0431\u0449\u0435\u0439 \u0441\u0432\u043e\u0435\u0439 \u043c\u0430\u0441\u0441\u0435, \u0438 \u043d\u043e\u0441\u0438\u0442\u0435\u043b\u0438 \u0440\u0443\u0441\u0441\u043a\u043e\u0433\u043e \u044f\u0437\u044b\u043a\u0430 \u0432 \u0447\u0430\u0441\u0442\u043d\u043e\u0441\u0442\u0438, \u0412\u0410\u041b\u042f\u0422\u0421\u042f \u043d\u0430 \u044d\u043a\u0437\u0430\u043c\u0435\u043d\u0435, \u0442\u0430\u043a \u043a\u0430\u043a \u043d\u0435\u043a\u043e\u0442\u043e\u0440\u044b\u0435 \u043f\u0440\u0438\u043d\u0446\u0438\u043f\u044b \u043d\u0430\u043f\u0438\u0441\u0430\u043d\u0438\u044f \u044d\u0441\u0441\u0435 \u0432 \u044f\u0437\u044b\u043a\u0430\u0445 \u0440\u0430\u0437\u043b\u0438\u0447\u0430\u044e\u0442\u0441\u044f.<\/p>\n

\u0411\u043e\u043b\u0435\u0435 \u0442\u043e\u0433\u043e, \u0435\u0441\u0442\u044c \u0434\u0430\u0436\u0435 \u0440\u0430\u0437\u0434\u0435\u043b \u0432 \u043f\u0440\u0438\u043a\u043b\u0430\u0434\u043d\u043e\u0439 \u043b\u0438\u043d\u0433\u0432\u0438\u0441\u0442\u0438\u043a\u0438, \u043a\u043e\u0442\u043e\u0440\u044b\u0439 \u0437\u0430\u043d\u0438\u043c\u0430\u0435\u0442\u0441\u044f \u043f\u0440\u043e\u0431\u043b\u0435\u043c\u0430\u043c\u0438, \u043e\u0431\u043e\u0437\u043d\u0430\u0447\u0435\u043d\u043d\u044b\u043c\u0438 \u0432\u044b\u0448\u0435, \u043f\u043e\u0434 \u043d\u0430\u0437\u0432\u0430\u043d\u0438\u0435\u043c \u0441ontrastive rhetoric<\/a>, \u0430 \u0434\u043b\u044f \u043f\u0440\u0435\u043f\u043e\u0434\u043e\u0432 \u0430\u043d\u0433\u043b\u0438\u0439\u0441\u043a\u043e\u0433\u043e, \u043a\u043e\u0442\u043e\u0440\u044b\u0435 \u0440\u0430\u0431\u043e\u0442\u0430\u044e\u0442 \u0441 \u043d\u043e\u0441\u0438\u0442\u0435\u043b\u044f\u043c\u0438 \u0440\u0430\u0437\u043d\u044b\u0445 \u044f\u0437\u044b\u043a\u043e\u0432 \u0435\u0441\u0442\u044c \u0432\u043e\u0442 \u0442\u0430\u043a\u043e\u0435 \u0447\u0443\u0434\u043e – Contrastive Rhetoric: Cross-Cultural Aspects of Second Language Writing (Cambridge Applied Linguistics) by Ulla M. Connor<\/span> – \u0440\u0435\u043a\u043e\u043c\u0435\u043d\u0434\u0443\u044e \u043a \u043f\u0440\u043e\u0447\u0442\u0435\u043d\u0438\u044e.<\/p>\n

\u041d\u0430 \u0440\u0443\u0441\u0441\u043a\u043e\u043c \u044f\u0437\u044b\u043a\u0435 \u044f \u044d\u0442\u0443 \u0442\u0435\u043c\u0443 \u043a\u0430\u043a-\u0442\u043e \u043f\u0440\u0438\u0433\u043b\u0430\u0448\u0430\u043b\u0430 \u043f\u043e\u043e\u0431\u0441\u0443\u0436\u0434\u0430\u0442\u044c \u043d\u0430 \u0444\u043e\u0440\u0443\u043c\u0435 efl.ru – \u043f\u0440\u0438\u0433\u043b\u0430\u0448\u0430\u044e \u0438 \u0441\u0435\u0439\u0447\u0430\u0441 \u0432\u0441\u0435\u0445 \u0436\u0435\u043b\u0430\u044e\u0449\u0438\u0445 \u043e\u0437\u043d\u0430\u043a\u043e\u043c\u0438\u0442\u044c\u0441\u044f \u0441 \u0437\u0430\u043c\u0435\u0442\u043a\u0430\u043c\u0438 \u043d\u0430 \u0442\u0435\u043c\u0443, \u0447\u0442\u043e \u0435\u0441\u0442\u044c Contrastive Rhetoric \u0438\u043b\u0438 \u043f\u043e\u0447\u0435\u043c\u0443 \u0441\u043d\u0438\u0436\u0430\u044e\u0442 \u043e\u0446\u0435\u043d\u043a\u0443 \u0437\u0430 \u044d\u0441\u0441\u0435, \u0435\u0441\u043b\u0438 \u0433\u0440\u0430\u043c\u043c\u0430\u0442\u0438\u043a\u0430 \u0438 \u043b\u0435\u043a\u0441\u0438\u043a\u0430 \u0431\u0435\u0437\u0443\u043f\u0440\u0435\u0447\u043d\u044b<\/a> – \u0432\u043e\u0437\u043c\u043e\u0436\u043d\u043e \u0412\u044b \u043d\u0430\u0439\u0434\u0451\u0442\u0435 \u043f\u0430\u0440\u0443 \u0441\u0442\u0440\u043e\u043a \u043f\u043e\u043b\u0435\u0437\u043d\u043e\u0441\u0442\u0435\u0439:)<\/p>\n

\u041f\u0440\u0438\u0447\u0438\u043d\u044b \u0441\u043d\u0438\u0436\u0435\u043d\u0438\u044f<\/span> \u043e\u0446\u0435\u043d\u043a\u0438 <\/span>\u0437\u0430<\/span><\/span><\/strong> cohesion and coherence<\/span><\/span>:<\/p>\n